My learning reflection

This term i have been doing heaps of writing and doing the draft process the draft process is
Delete
Rearrange
Add
Fix
Talk it out
I have deleted things and failed many times when i was doing the DRAFT process but then i finished and i am happy with what i have done.
Here is a piece of writing that i have wrote and then done the draft process.

You locked me away when i was right there in front of you It was sorta  like a game of hide and seek but i couldn't find you well not the real you.I knew you were really hurting but you didn't need to hide away, It's hard to find someone who doesn't want to be found.It's been weeks and i think you finally want to be found. I hear you screaming out I found you the real you.It wasn't easy but you stooped hiding from your fears and faced them  I could find you again.

Why did u lock me away when i was right in front of you It was like a game of hide and seek but i couldn't find you well not the real you.I knew you were hurting but you didn't need to hide away, It's hard to find someone who doesn't want to be found.It's been weeks and i think you finally want to be found. I hear you screaming out I found you the real you.It wasn't easy but you stooped hiding from your fears and faced them so I could find you again.